My name is abdulraheem . I`m 22 years old and I`m student in engineering & petroleum college in kuwait university . I decided to study petroleum engineering because I had diploma from college of technichal studies and the petroleum eng. have good future .My dreams in life are to be petroleum eng. and have along and happy life with my wife .
finally , i wrote this paragraph for my HW.
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Hi Abdelraheem! Thanks for completing your weekend online assignments. I enjoyed reading your introduction; however, I've noticed that you didn't use articles where they are needed. For example, you said: "I'm student"; the correct way is to say, I'm a student, as the word student is countable. but this is not a problem especially if your mother tongue language is not Arabic. I believe that with more practice using English, your grammar skills should improve.
Again, Abdelraheem, thanks for your good work and I wish you all the best.
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2) The photo you have published with your post looks interesting although it's kind of aggressive and scary ( to me at least :)); I wonder where you've found it as I tried to go to [Yabadoo.com] but no such website exists, according to Google. It'd be great if you could send me the source of the photo. Thanks!
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